downswing: (十四)

[personal profile] downswing 2022-10-25 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)


( A broader, heartier sword might have delivered the parry, even at short distance. Where there is strength of the arm, width rescues even the slow. Bichen is not so forgiving — nimble, serpentine, fast-striking. When he fails her with a treacle-step, she has nothing to give him. The sword does not fail the swordsman.

This, catching the strike on his flank when he's too dull-witted to retreat in time entirely, sends shivers of ache to his ribs, his spine. Off-centres him, and he slips in a broad circle to the right, shifting to send Bichen down, first to target her lower back, then her legs — whichever space the blade might find unattended.

Sword work, so often, is in the hedging of wagers, in luck brokering chance. Skill benefits strategy, not a dirty brawl amid linen lines. )


Your husband knows you fight like this?

( ...from what Wangji has glimpsed of Xie Yun, her husband's dubious appetite for war may well have driven her to the sword. )

downswing: (dandelion)

[personal profile] downswing 2022-10-28 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)


( By now, they're old lions, barely fanged, paws leathery and battered, claws skidding. He glides back, Bichen raised at the last moment, brought forward, then diagonally down, less to forcibly disarm her than to signal the last parry.

After, he pulls back, drifts a few steps farther to inject distance, and ends with the charcoal-smudged sketch of a half-bow, Bichen still bare and in hand. In the heat of the quieting, cooling moment, some do not understand peace has abruptly been implemented. Should momentum drive her forward, he is at least armed to fend. )


You find me overly verbose.

( This, while breath ripples, ebbs and tides and stabilises in his worn lungs. Few have assailed him with that accusation. Farther out, linens sway each way, begging Wangji's attention to gently right them on the line. )